Four words: Kick ass

THE best cartoon on Newgrounds. I don't know why it is number 2 on the top 50. It deserves better. I was left speechless. Now I shall go take a piss. Me bladder is full. Oh god I pissed on the keyboard!!! Oh well. Great cartoon. Oh great, I think I crapped my pants!!

looks great but maybe you should use some voices

i think you can do alot with this cartoon but you need to make it a litte more exciting